Modul 5: Story 66 A Shoplifter’s Decision

Video 01 Story Presentation 01.

Video 02 Story Presentation 02.

Audio 01 The story

A Shoplifter’s Decision

Dan looked up and down the shelves of the local convenience store anticipating what he could get away with shoplifting. He had been shoplifting for five years and targeted this shop most weeks.

As he slipped a bottle of wine inside his coat, he noticed something strange. There was a man waiting at the counter to be served, but he had no items to buy in his hands. Instead, he had one hand firmly in his jacket pocket, and the other hand was furiously trembling as he wiped sweat from his forehead. Dan knew immediately that he was armed with a gun and was attempting to rob the shop tills, so he quietly stepped into the back room where the owner of the shop was stacking boxes.

“There’s a man with a gun in there. You need to call the police!” he urgently whispered.

The owner panicked a little but took Dan’s advice, and within minutes the police arrived and arrested the armed man.

 “Thank you so much! I could have lost all my money and possibly my life if it weren’t for you,” the owner sighed with relief.

“Don’t worry about it, honestly.”

Dan felt rather guilty. He suddenly understood how important this shop was to the man and felt bad that he had secretly been stealing from him for years.

“Please, let me show my appreciation to you,” the owner pleaded. “I’ll give you 60% off of everything you ever get from my store.”

Dan thought about this generous offer. He was currently getting items for free since he was stealing them, so was this discount really of much impact? He could see that the man had tears in his eyes and remembered again how much worth the shop had to the owner. In the end, Dan agreed to the discount and never stole again.

Video 03 Simple statements

Audio 02 Simple statements

1. Dan scanned – shelves – local convenience store – with eyes
2. anticipating – what items – could get away – shoplifting
3. shoplifting – five years
4. targeted – shop – most frequently
5. slipping – bottle of wine – inside – coat
6. noticed – something unusual
7. man – waiting – counter – served
8. no items – buy – hands
9. keeping – one of – hands – inside – jacket pocket
10. holding on – something
11. heavily perspiring
12. nervously wiped sweat – forehead – other hand
13. furiously trembling
14. Dan – immediately realized – man – armed – gun
15. man – about – attempt – rob – shop tills
16. Dan – silently stepped into – back room
17. back room – shop owner – stacking boxes
18. “ man – gun – in there,” quickly whispered – owner. “call – police!”
19. owner panicked – little
20. took – Dan’s advice
21. within minutes – police arrived – scene – arrested – armed man
22. owner thanked Dan – saving – money
23. thanked Dan – possibly saving – life
24. Dan – finally understood – how important – shop – owner
25. felt – rather guilty
26. felt ashamed – stealing – him – years
27. “please – let me show – appreciation – you,” – owner pleaded
28. offered Dan – 60% discount – everything – he ever get – his store
29. Dan reflected – generosity – this offer
30. currently – getting items – this shop – free
31. noticed – owner – had tears – gratitude – eyes
32. remembered – just how much – shop meant – owner
33. agreed – discount
34. never stole again

Video 04 Conjunctions A

Audio 03 Conjunctions A

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Video 05 Conjunctions B

Audio 04 Conjunctions B

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Audio 05-6 Story versions

The story (version A)

By scanning the shelves of the local convenience store with his eyes, Dan was anticipating what items he could get away with shoplifting. He had been shoplifting for five years, targeting this shop most frequently.

While slipping a bottle of wine inside his coat, he noticed something unusual. A man waiting at the counter to be served had no items to buy in his hands. What is more, he was keeping one of his hands inside his jacket pocket, apparently holding on to something.

As he was heavily perspiring, he nervously wiped sweat from his forehead with his other hand. It was furiously trembling, so Dan immediately realized that the man was not only armed with a gun but also about to attempt to rob the shop tills, so he silently stepped into the back room where the shop owner was stacking boxes.

“There’s a man with a gun in there,” he quickly whispered to the owner. “Call the police!”

This made the owner panic a little, but he took Dan’s advice, and within minutes, the police arrived at the scene and arrested the armed man. The owner thanked Dan for saving both his money and, possibly, his life.

Dan, who finally understood how important the shop was to the owner, felt rather guilty and ashamed for stealing from him for years.

“Please, let me show my appreciation to you,” the owner pleaded and offered Dan a 60% discount off of everything he would ever get from his store. Dan reflected on the generosity of this offer as he was currently getting items from this shop for free, but when he noticed that the owner had tears of gratitude in his eyes, he remembered just how much the shop meant to the owner.

In the end, he agreed to the discount and never stole again.

The story (version B)

Dan scanned the shelves of the local convenience store with his eyes, anticipating what items he could get away with shoplifting. He had been shoplifting for five years and targeted this shop most frequently.

Just as he was slipping a bottle of wine inside his coat, he noticed something unusual. A man was waiting at the counter to be served but had no items to buy in his hands. Instead, he was keeping one of his hands inside his jacket pocket, and it appeared he was holding on to something.

Since he was heavily perspiring, he nervously wiped sweat from his forehead with his other hand, which was furiously trembling. Dan, who immediately realized that the man was armed with a gun and was about to attempt to rob the shop tills, silently stepped into the back room where the shop owner was stacking boxes. He quickly whispered to the owner that there was a man with a gun in there and suggested that he should call the police.

Although the owner panicked a little, he took Dan’s advice. As a result, the police arrived at the scene within minutes and arrested the armed man. The owner thanked Dan for saving not only his money but possibly his life as well.

Now that Dan had finally understood how important the shop was to the owner, he felt rather guilty and ashamed for stealing from him for years. The owner pleaded to let him show his appreciation to him by offering Dan a 60% discount off of everything he would ever get from his store.

Dan reflected on the generosity of this offer; he was currently getting items from this shop for free, after all. Noticing, however, that the owner had tears of gratitude in his eyes, he remembered just how much the shop meant to the owner. 

Eventually, he agreed to the discount and never stole again.